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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Debby~
I feel glad about your kind comment
But.. That I ask is a little different things
I asked you to wirte some questiong you did during the our lesson
because I exactly want to know your questions
as a results I can hear the questions that you did next time~
thank you for your effory keep on good work for me please
sorry~
<In your opinion what would be the best personality of a foreign teacher?>
Um...
In my opinion, your personnality is good for students.
Foreign teachers must have patience to wait student.
and they need to get sense of responsibilty about thier student
Just for money, they must not treat student like way to make money
강사 첨삭
Hi There Gi-[이름]!^^
As your teacher, I feel pride to hear you talk of teachers that way.
You are correct and in reality some teachers work just for the money but it is a must
to reach out to students. Patience really does make a great teacher.
I\'m sorry about the favor because some things slip my mind.
Let me make it up to you.
Here are the questions for the listening that you missed today:
1.What do you buy more often?
2-Do you buy the rolled one or the triangle?
3- You will read the part of Jim.
4. Why did he him extra money?
Fighting!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Hi Debby~I feel glad about your kind commentBut.. That I ask is a little different things>> Hi Debby~I feel glad about your kind comment but I need to ask is a little different thing.I asked you to wirte some questiong you did during the our lessonbecause I exactly want to know your questions as a results I can hear the questions that you did next time~
>> I asked you to wirte some questions that you did during the our lessonbecause I exactly want to know your questions.As a result, I can hear the questions that you asked for the next time~Thank you for your effory keep on good work for me pleasesorry~>> Thank you for your efforts and keep up good work for me pleaseSorry~<In your opinion what would be the best personality of a foreign teacher?>Um...In my opinion, your personnality is good for students.
>> In my opinion, your personality is good for students.Foreign teachers must have patience to wait for student.
>> Foreign teachers must have patience to wait for students. and they need to get sense of responsibilty about thier student
>> And they need to have sense of responsibilty about thier students.Just for money, they must not treat student like way to make money
>> They must not treat their students just in a way to make money.
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