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2014-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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I shocked after seeing today rating T.T But I know why it is... I agree it Today, I can't a little hear yout questions so I repeated "pardon me" as expected English is not easy I'm sad H/W What do you think is the worst thing that can happen to you in a Foreign country? If I guess it, I think that somebody kidnap me I don't know about the foreign country so I can't take right action Also, That I commit a crime is worst thing that can happen to me Although I don't know crime that the foreign country set, I wiil do it I will be punish

강사 첨삭

Hi there Gi [이름]!^^ The purpose that I make you aware of you mistakes is for you to take the challenge of not making the same error again. Cheer up! Don\'t be sad. We always have a space to do better!^^ Smile! ^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I shocked after seeing today rating T.T>> I was shocked after seeing today\'s  rating T.TBut I know why it is... I agree it >> But I know why and I agree with it.Today, I can\'t a little hear yout questions so I repeated \"pardon me\"as expected English is not easy >> Today I can\'t hear your questions so I always repeat saying \"pardon me\". As expected English is not easy.I\'m sad. >> CORRECT OR> I felt sad.H/WWhat do you think is the worst thing that can happen to you in a Foreign country?>> CORRECTIf I guess it, I think that somebody kidnap me >> If I would guess it, I think that would be when somebody would kidnap me.I don\'t know about the foreign country so I can\'t take right action. >> CORRECT Or> I would not be familiar with a foreign country so I won\'t know what do.Also, That I commit a crime is worst thing that can happen to me. >> Also, if I commit a crime, that is the worst thing that can happen to me.Although I don\'t know crime that the foreign country set,I wiil do it I will be punish >> Although I don\'t know what crime that the foreign country has set,if I will do it and I will be punished.

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