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학생이 쓴 원문
1. We study hard in high school in order to enter a good college.
2. I think Japanese students should think over the risk their taking.
3. Europeans and Asians are completely different each other.
4. I think I am really lucky that I could meet you.
5. I found that the number of universities which accept foreign students have been increased
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Paul!
Thank you for your composition today! You are such a diligent student! Keep it up! Take care and have a Merry Christmas!
T. JanE ^^
1. We study hard in high school in order to enter a good college.>> Correct
2. I think Japanese students should think over the risk their taking.>> I think Japanese students should think over the risk they are taking.
3. Europeans and Asians are completely different each other.>> The Europeans and Asians are completely different from each other.
4. I think I am really lucky that I could meet you.>> Correct
5. I found that the number of universities which accept foreign students have been increased
>> I found that the number of universities which accept foreign students has been increasing.
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