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2014-12-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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1. We study hard in high school in order to enter a good college. 2. I think Japanese students should think over the risk their taking. 3. Europeans and Asians are completely different each other. 4. I think I am really lucky that I could meet you. 5. I found that the number of universities which accept foreign students have been increased

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Paul! Thank you for your composition today! You are such a diligent student! Keep it up! Take care and have a Merry Christmas! T. JanE ^^ 1. We study hard in high school in order to enter a good college.>> Correct 2. I think Japanese students should think over the risk their taking.>> I think Japanese students should think over the risk they are taking. 3. Europeans and Asians are completely different each other.>> The Europeans and Asians are completely different from each other. 4. I think I am really lucky that I could meet you.>> Correct 5. I found that the number of universities which accept foreign students have been increased >> I found that the number of universities which accept foreign students has been increasing.

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