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2015-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Sarah

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1. For yourself, do you sometimes step back and have time for self-reflection? I sometimes step back and have time for self-reflection. Whenever I become sick and tired of holding myself back,this really works out. It helps unravel the problems I face and give me some insight. 2. With a busy life, it‟s hard to find time alone. Where do you usually go in order to find your own time alone? I usually go to toilet where tenderly renders me poob poob fragrance 3. What's important to you regarding your personal life? What I live by would be love, success, and undying passion. As I've given far more than I deserve, I shoould pay back to my parents, friends and all aquataince I love. And also I wouldn't have been happy if great korean heroes had not fought the world risking their lives.I thank you to all those korean heroes from the bottome of my heart.

강사 첨삭

Hello Anchan!^^   Wow, I was actually surprised that you made this meaningful composition today. It is your first ever homework with me!^^ I really appreciate it and don\'t hesitate to keep sending me your personal essays or compositions. I am always happy to help you with your written English. Keep it up!^^   Teacher Sarah   1. For yourself, do you sometimes step back and have time for self-reflection?I sometimes step back and have time for self-reflection. >> CORRECT OR: Yes I do. I sometimes take a break for self-reflection. Whenever I become sick and tired of holding myself back,this really works out. >> CORRECT OR: This is really effective especially when I feel sick and tired of holding myself back. It helps unravel the problems I face and give me some insight. >> CORRECT OR: It helps make plain or clear the problems I face and gives me some insight. 2. With a busy life, it‟s hard to find time alone. Where do you usually go in order to find your own time alone?I usually go to toilet where tenderly renders me poob poob fragrance >> DO YOU MEAN: I usually find time alone in the toilet when I do my thing. (pooping) :)3. What\'s important to you regarding your personal life?What I live by would be love, success, and undying passion. >> I live by the principles of love, success, and undying passion. As I\'ve given far more than I deserve, I shoould pay back to my parents, friends and all aquataince I love. >> Since they have given me far more than I deserve, I should pay back to my parents, friends, and all the people (acquaintance) I love.   And also I wouldn\'t have been happy if great korean heroes had not fought the world risking their lives. >> Also, I wouldn\'t be this happy if it weren\'t for our great Korean heroes who fought for our country risking their lives. I thank you to all those korean heroes from the bottome of my heart. >> I am thankful to all the Korean heroes from the bottom of my heart. OR: I am deeply and forever grateful to all our Korean heroes.

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