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학생이 쓴 원문
I think friends are very important our life.
But your question is difficult that i answer in a word.
It is necessary to save for him sometimes.
I CAN NOT good answer.
Lexi teacher !
I am going to VIETNAM for golf with my friends tomorrow morning.
so i can not your class during trip.
I will come back on tuesday morning next week.
SEE you then. Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I\'m so envious, you\'re going there to play golf.
You\'re really enjoying your life.
I hope that you can tour around the place and take beautiful pictures and buy unique souvenirs.
So don\'t forget your camera.
I am looking forward for our class on Tuesday.
I would love to hear your stories.
Have fun there and break a leg on your plays.
I\'ll see you on Tuesday!
__Teacher Lexi
I think friends are very important our life.
>> I think friends are very important in our lives. But your question is difficult that i answer in a word.>>But your question is difficult so let me answer in just a word.
It is necessary to save for him sometimes.>>It is necessary to save friendship sometimes.
I CAN NOT good answer.>>I can\'t give a good answer.Lexi teacher !
>>Teacher Lexi!I am going to VIETNAM for golf with my friends tomorrow morning.>>I am going to Vietnam to play gold with my friends tomorrow morning.
so i can not your class during trip.>>So I can\'t take your class during the trip.
I will come back on tuesday morning next week.>>Correct (capitalization - Tuesday)
SEE you then. Thank you.
>>Correct
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