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2015-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I don't know what country he comes from 2. My brother wants that I go swimming with him. 3. Nothing is as precious as one's health. 4. Do you know anyone who can speak French? 5. Why did you go to New York? To visit my brother.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition! You are such a smart girl! Stay energetic and take care always! T. JanE ^^ 1. I don\'t know what country he comes from>> Correct 2. My brother wants that I go swimming with him.>> My brother wants me to go swimming with him.  3. Nothing is as precious as one\'s health.>> Correct 4. Do you know anyone who can speak French?>> Correct 5. Why did you go to New York? To visit my brother. >> Correct

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