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2015-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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In not more than 10 sentences, write your thoughts about the following topic: Would your life be better or worse if you knew the day, time, and place that you were going to die? I think it can be nice for us. when this situations occurs, I will tell my parents about my death date, and tell them to go to travel a lot with me. also, I can plan the future to get more better life easy.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Paul! Thank you for your composition today! You must be in a good mood to answer your homework this morning. You are amazing! keep it up! Take care and seize the day! T. JanE ^^ I think it can be nice for us. >> Correct when this situations occurs, I will tell my parents about my death date, and tell them to go to travel a lot with me. >> If this is the case, I would tell my parents about the date of my death, then I would ask them to travel a lot with me.  also, I can plan the future to get more better life easy. >> Also, I can plan for my future to get a better life easily.   

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