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2015-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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1. Mr. [Name] is very ill and needs to lay down before we leave for the auditorium. 2. At the recital earlier today he looked pale, too. 3. For some reason, last month he chose not to go to the zoo with the class. 4. The class members all raise their hands to volunteer to help him carry his books. 5. I value your ideas; please give me some advice.

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Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! You did a great job in answering your homework! Keep it up! Take care and have a good day! T. JanE ^^ 1. Mr. [Name] is very ill and needs to lay down before we leave for the auditorium.>> Mr. [Name] is very ill and needs to _b. lie_ down before we leave for the auditorium. 2. At the recital earlier today he looked pale, too.>> Correct 3. For some reason, last month he chose not to go to the zoo with the class.>> Correct 4. The class members all raise their hands to volunteer to help him carry his books.>> The class members all _c. raised_ their hands to volunteer to help him carry his books. 5. I value your ideas; please give me some advice. >> Correct  

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