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In not more than 10 sentences, write a composition of your thoughts about the following topic:
What is true happiness?
i think true happiness is something that we laugh a lot and feel comfortable.
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Hi there, Paul!
Thank you for your composition today! Whoa! Despite feeling sleepy, you managed to answer your homework immediately! Way to go! Take care and start your week right!
T. JanE ^^i think true happiness is something that we laugh a lot and feel comfortable.
>> I think, true happiness is felt when we laugh a lot and we feel comfortable.
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