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학생이 쓴 원문
What's your greatest achievement so far?
My greatest achivement was happend 2years ago.
i was despaired at math because it was very hard for me.
So I was absorbed in math. So I corrected all problems.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Paul!
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T. JanE ^^
My greatest achivement was happend 2years ago.>> My greatest achievement happened two years ago. i was despaired at math because it was very hard for me.>> I was in despair because math was very hard for me.
So I was absorbed in math.
>> Correct
So I corrected all problems. >> Because of that, I was able to solve my problem.
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