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학생이 쓴 원문
In not more than 10 sentences, write your thoughts about the following topic:
What makes a good friend?
I think the person who have active personaility makes a good friend. And the person who keep the appointment well can make a good friend.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Paul!
Thank you for your composition today! I wonder how many friends you have. I assume you have a lot. Take care and enjoy the day!
T. JanE ^^
I think the person who have active personaility makes a good friend.
>> I think a person who is active makes a good friend.
And the person who keep the appointment well can make a good friend.
>> Also, a person who can come to an appointment on time can make a good friend.
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