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2015-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

In not more than 10 sentences, write a composition of your thoughts about the following topic: Do you believe in luck? I think we have always luck.we avoid a lot of balls and dangerous thing. Also we alive now so we can say we have a luck.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Paul!Thank you for your composition today! Since you believe in luck, I hope you\'re lucky enough to finish all your homework today so you can take some rest this weekend. You deserve to have a break. Take care and enjoy the weekend! T. JanE ^^ I think we have always luck. >> I think we always have luck. We avoid a lot of balls and dangerous thing. >> Correct Also we alive now so we can say we have a luck. >> Also, we are alive now, so we can say we\'re lucky.  

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