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학생이 쓴 원문
In not more than 10 sentences,
write your thoughts about the following topic:
What would make you feel more worthy?
I think reading a book make me more worthy. Because I think that I got a lesson from the book.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Paul!
Thank you for your composition today! I really admire you for your diligence and perseverance. I\'m sure you will be a successful person in the future. Stay on track! Enjoy the holidays!T. JanE ^^I think reading a book make me more worthy. Because I think that I got a lesson from the book.
>> I think reading a book is worth my time because I always get good lessons from books.
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