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2015-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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In not more than 10 sentences, write your thoughts about the following topic: Do you think that the new year holiday was too long? Or do you think it was just fine? Why? When I was young,I thought the new year hoilday was short because the time flew fast.But now, I think the new holiday is too long because I can't study in library and there is no time to play with my friends because of visiting country

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Paul! Thank you for your composition today! Our opinions really change as we age. It\'s too bad that you couldn\'t meet your friends during the holidays. I hope you\'ll have fun today. Take care and have a refreshing day! T. JanE ^^ When I was young, I thought the new year holiday was short because the time flew fast. >> Correct But now, I think the new holiday is too long because I can\'t study in library and there is no time to play with my friends because of visiting country >> But now, I think the holiday is too long because I couldn\'t study in the library and there was no time for me to play with my friends since they went to another country.

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