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2015-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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In not more than 10 sentences, write your thoughts about the following topic: Would you like to live in another country for good? If so, where? Why? I want to live in country where a lots of plants exists. Because flowers and trees make me feel better.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Paul! Thank you for your composition today! I didn\'t expect that flowers and trees make you feel better. Well, I\'m sure there is a place with lots of trees and flowers in your own country. Take care and seize the day! T. JanE ^^I want to live in country where a lots of plants exists. Because flowers and trees make me feel better. >> I want to live in a country where there are lots of plants because flowers and trees make me feel better.

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