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2015-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

학생이 쓴 원문

Jeremy is 10 years old. Jenny is 8 years old. -Jeremy is older than Jenny. The Alps are very high. -They are the highest mountains in Europe. -An ocean is larger than a sea. A Rolls Royce costs a lot of money. A Twingo costs less. -A Rolls Royce is more expensive than a Twingo. John's results were bad. Fred's were very poor. -Fred's results were worse than John's. This exercise is not very difficult. -It's easier than I expected. The weather is not good today. It's raining. -I hope the weather will be better next week. People are not very friendly in big cities. -They are usually more friendly in small towns. -In the government of a country, the President is most important person. -People say that Chinese is more difficult to learn than English

강사 첨삭

Great Evening, [이름]!
How are you? I hope that you are doing well. I hope to hear from you soon.
I just want to say that I appreciate your effort in studying.
However, there might be some error so please do keep in mind the proper way of composing a grammatically correct sentence.
Keep the positive thoughts and it will get you a very long way!
Remember to read some books to enhance your vocabulary and also knowledge in the certain matter.
Reading books is food for the brain. Keep studying! See you!

Teacher Carmen^^

Jeremy is 10 years old. Jenny is 8 years old.
-Jeremy is older than Jenny.
>> Correct!

The Alps are very high.
-They are the highest mountains in Europe.
>> Correct!

-An ocean is larger than a sea.
>> Correct!

A Rolls Royce costs a lot of money. A Twingo costs less.
-A Rolls Royce is more expensive than a Twingo.
>>Correct!

John\'s results were bad. Fred\'s were very poor.
-Fred\'s results were worse than John\'s.
>> Correct!

This exercise is not very difficult.
-It\'s easier than I expected.
>> Correct!

The weather is not good today. It\'s raining.
-I hope the weather will be better next week.
>> Correct!

People are not very friendly in big cities.
-They are usually more friendly in small towns.
>> Correct!
OR>> friendlier

-In the government of a country, the President is most important person.
>> In the government of a country, the President is the most important person.

-People say that Chinese is more difficult to learn than English
>>Correct!


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