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2015-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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What are the 3 most important characteristics of a leader? In my opinion, the leader need decision, trust and strong drive. First, team work is very important in the team so, team members have to believe each other. Of course, team leader have to believe them. Second, team leader need the decision for his team. If he doesn't have the decision, his team can't get the success. After decision, team leader have to do strong drive. And then his team will be to get success.

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Hello [이름]!   I appreciate that you wrote about this. Some reminders: 1. Check your subject verb agreement. The subject and verb must agree in number: both must be singular, or both must be plural. Problems occur in the present tense because one must add an -s or -es at the end of the verb when the subjects or the entity performing the action is a singular third person: he, she, it, or words for which these pronouns could substitute. examples: The leader needs you. The leades need you.   Teacher Venus^^In my opinion, the leader need decision, trust and strong drive. >>>In my opinion, the leader needs decision, trust and strong drive. First, team work is very important in the team so, team members have to believe each other. >>>First, team work is very important in the team so team members have to believe each other.Of course, team leader have to believe them. >>>Of course, the team leader has to believe them.Second, team leader need the decision for his team. >>>Second, the team leader needs to decide for his team. If he doesn\'t have the decision, his team can\'t get the success. >>>If he doesn\'t have the decision, his team can\'t be successful.After decision, team leader have to do strong drive. >>>After deciding, the team leader has to have a strong drive. And then his team will be to get success. >>>And then his team will be successful.

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