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When I was elementary's student, my classmates and I had to role play.
I wanted to be main character.
Of course my classmates wanted it.
Main character had to memorize a lot of things.
So I gave up to be main character.
However my classmates didn't know the reason why I gave up it.
They were sorry to me.
I was very sorry to them.
However, we could play it very well.
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- to feel sympathy for someone because they are in a difficult or unpleasant situation
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When I was elementary\'s student, my classmates and I had to role play.
>>>When I was an elementary school student, my classmates and I had to role play.
I wanted to be main character.
>>>I wanted to be the main character.
Of course my classmates wanted it.
>>>CORRECT
Main character had to memorize a lot of things.
>>>The main character had to memorize a lot of things.
So I gave up to be main character.
>>>So I gave up being the main character.
However my classmates didn\'t know the reason why I gave up it.
>>>However my classmates didn\'t know the reason why I gave it up.
They were sorry to me.
>>>They were sorry for me.
I was very sorry to them.
>>>I was very sorry for them.
However, we could play it very well.
>>>CORRECT
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