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2017-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Travis

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Question ) What do you think about technology these days? I think that technology is neccesary for people. Technology makes our life convenient. For example We can talk to other nation's people through the phone. And We are also able to go to Space because of the improvement of technology. So I consdier technology as a good thing. About E-mail I received the e-mail from oversea client. He wrote the sentence " Hi [이름] How are you? " When I send a e-mail to him, Is it right that I wrote down "How are you?" If there are more good expression, please let me know. And What's mean this sentence " My colleague informed me that Since the tax have to be paid by sender, Which is your company, I cannot clear the custom.." I don't know What's the sentence means...especially "I cannot clear the custom" Please explain.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for answering your homework. So here are the things that I want you to focus on. Regarding on your question about \"I cannot clear the custom\", I can\'t answer it right now because I need the email itself for me to Identify the phrase.

Teacher Travis.

I think that technology is neccesary for people.

>>Correct.

>>OR: Technology is necessary for us.

Technology makes our life convenient.

>>Correct.

>>OR: Technology makes our life more easier.

For example We can talk to other nation\'s people through the phone.

>>For example we can speak to another person overseas.

And We are also able to go to Space because of the improvement of technology.

>>And we can also got to space because of our advance technology.

So I consdier technology as a good thing.

>>Correct

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Using the phrase \"How are you\" is acceptable, there are many things that you can use.

- How you doing?

- Greeting Mr. ____

- It is a pleasure meeting you.

- How is your day?

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