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2017-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Travis

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Question) Why is it important to love your job? I think that Mental Attitude is the most important thing when doing anything. If some person do their job with disliking the work, his efficiency will be low. Also he never feel the worth. But Once he do his job with liking the work, He will attain the best performance and Worth. So, I think it is important to love my job when living in life.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름].

I\'m glad that you answer your homework, you\'re right that you should love your job because your job will love you back.

I\'m sorry but I forgot what you want me to place on your email. what was it again?

Teacher Travis.

I think that Mental Attitude is the most important thing when doing anything.

>>Correct.

>>OR: I think that having a good attitude is the most important thing when doing anything.
If some person do their job with disliking the work, his efficiency will be low.

>>If someone hate his job, he will have a low efficiency.
Also he never feel the worth. But Once he do his job with liking the work, He will attain the best performance and Worth.

>>Also he will not be worthy, But if he will like his job, he will acquire the performance.
So, I think it is important to love my job when living in life.

>>Correct.

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