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Hi Juhee!^^

Thank you for your homework. Anyway, I hope that our society will be more considerate to women as well, so we can prove our worth in the society.^^

See you in class!^^

~Kelly^^

I can obviously say that there are a huge gap between women and men in my country because Korean is based on confucianism which came from China and prefer (preference for?) men.

>> I can obviously say that there is a huge gap between women and men in my country, because Korean culture is based on Confucianism which came from China and it favors men over women.
It had defined there were different responsibilities according to gender.

>> Correct.

OR:

>> It had defined the different responsibilities according to gender.

For instance, only men had to work and earn for their family\'s living and women had to stay at home, took care of their children.

>> Correct.

OR:

>> For instance, only men had to work and earn for their family\'s living and women had to stay at home and took care of their children.

Even though women wanted to work by themselves, it wasn\'t allowed to do that in the past.
>> Even though women wanted to work by themselves, they were not allowed to do that in the past.
For past a few decades,it seemed to be reduced gender gap disparities ,but they still remain everywhere.

>> For the past few decades, it seemed that gender gap disparities were reduced, but still remain or exist everywhere.

As we know,in the work place most of men have more a power position and are promoted than women,despite of same qualifications.

>> As we know, in the workplace, most men get a higher job position and promotion more than women, despite the fact that they have the same qualifications.

People assume that women are supposed to get married soon after that they will resign their job quickly.

>> People assume that women are supposed to get married soon after they resign from their job.

OR:

>> People assume that women are expected to resign from their job soon after they got married.

Those people who think women are too emotional to take a serious job. 

>> Did you mean: Those people think women are too emotional to take a serious job. 
Does that mean women are less responsible than men?

>> Correct.

The problem is, our society doesn\'t give same changes to women.

>> Correct.

OR:

>> The problem is, our society doesn\'t offer the same opportunities to women.