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Good morning Juhee!
Thank you for sharing your travel experiences with me. I hope that you enjoy your future travel experiences.^^
Have a great day!
~Kelly^^
A: Personally, I try to travel as much as I can during my holiday.
>> Correct.
Since I’ve been living in Bangkok for 2 years, there are various tropical islands and unique places in Thailand and also it’s easy to fly out other countries near by Thailand.
>> Since I’ve been living in Bangkok for 2 years, there are various tropical islands and unique places in Thailand which I visited. Also, it’s easy to fly out to other countries nearby Thailand.
I absoultely enjoy having local food that I can only eat a specific area.
>> I absolutely enjoy having local food that I can only eat at a specific area.
You could learn other manners or different cultures from this experience.
>> Correct.
It’s an enthusiasm if you find a good local restaurant spontaneously.
>> Correct.
That\'s why I don\'t google and find a restaurant in the internet base on people\'s comments.
>> That\'s why I don\'t Google and find a restaurant in the internet based on people\'s comments.
It feels like I\'m the only one person who knows this special place.
>> Correct.
On the other hand, I might have uncomfortable food there, however it\'s also a special experience for me.
>> Did you mean: On the other hand, there were food that makes me uncomfortable there, however it\'s also a special experience for me.
That\'s the most enjoyable thing during my holiday.
>> Correct.
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