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Hi there Juhee!
Thank you for sharing your idea about our topic. I totally agree with your opinion that there is nothing wrong with men and women becoming friends as long as they enjoy each other\'s company.^^ Anyway, have a great Monday! :)
~Kelly^^
I’m definitely sure a man and a woman can be friends.
>> Correct.
Why do many people think that they can’t be friends? I’d like to ask them.
>> Correct.
We are all just human being and have our own individualities.
>> We are all just human beings and we have our own individualities.
It doesn\'t make any sense, other gender can\'t be friends each other.
>> It doesn\'t make any sense, when different genders can\'t be friends to each other.
If I meet someone who is a guy and has something in common with me, I would keep him being as your true friend regardless of gender.
>> If I meet a guy who has something in common with me, I would keep him as a true friend regardless of his gender.
Personally, I guess it sounds like sexist.
>> Correct.
Being a friend meaning is not about gender, It\'s about how much we connect to them and can be on their side no matter what happenes.
>> Being a friend is not about gender, but how we connect to them and be on their side no matter what happens.
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