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2017-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Q. Do you set rules for yourself about how you use your time? A. I set 2 rules about how to use my time. First is the "Do take advantage of the time left over". When living a day, we usually have left time. For example, Bus or subway in the way to work. If we take advantage of these left time like memorizing english words, we can do many things. Second is the "Get the best of your time". All people have the same time. But, The efficiency per hour is all different. That's because Everyone has different investment and passion for same time. So, If I don't do my best for taking advantage of time, I am just wasting of my time.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

All of us have rules we live by whether we realize it or not.

Sometimes setting and following rules lead us to the right path.

However, these also restrict us from doing things that we enjoy.

Thanks for writing this. See you tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


Q. Do you set rules for yourself about how you use your time?

A. I set 2 rules about how to use my time.

>>> Correct!

First is the \"Do take advantage of the time left over\".

>>> The first rule is taking advantage of our free time.

When living a day, we usually have left time.

>>> In a day, we usually have free time.

For example, Bus or subway in the way to work.

>>> For example, we have our free time when we commute to work.

If we take advantage of these left time like memorizing english words, we can do many things.

>>> If we take advantage of that time, we can do many things like memorizing English words.

Second is the \"Get the best of your time\".

>>> The second one is making the most of our time.

All people have the same time.

>>> Correct!

But, The efficiency per hour is all different.

>>> But, how we spend our time differ.

That\'s because Everyone has different investment and passion for same time.

>>> That\'s because everyone has different investment and passion.
So, If I don\'t do my best for taking advantage of time, I am just wasting of my time.

>>> So, if I don\'t do my best to take advantage of my time, I will be just wasting my time.

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