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Thanks for having the class earlier and for doing great in the discussion.

Also, I want to thank you for always doing your homework. I appreciate your effort.

I made the necessary corrections below. I hope you could check them.

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~Teacher Shanee^^,

H.W. Write an essay about a decision you regret the most.

A. A decision I regret the most is when I decided to join the Jazz club in the university.

>>> Correct!

At First, Because I was just interested in the Jazz, I joined that club.

>>> At first, I was just interested in jazz so I joined that club.

But, becasue of this, I couldn\'t study a lot.

>>> Correct! [because]

So, Grades in the university was low.

>>> So, my grades in the university were low.

If I didn\'t join that club, I should get the great score and apply for the great job.

>>> If I didn\'t join that club, I should have gotten good grades and was able to qualify for a better job.

If I go back to that time, I want to focus more on my study.

>>> If I could go back to that time, I would focus more on my studies.