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학생이 쓴 원문
1. We want to self-realization and we need money for better life.
2. At first time we will have a quiet life but we will lazy as time goes by and at the end we will miss work.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]! ^^,) Happy Monday!
Thank you so much for your time.^^
I have made some modifications for you to review later on.
We can also talk about this in class if you want to.
I will see you later then.^^
Enjoy the rest of the day!
_T. Mayleen :)
1. We want to self-realization and we need money for better life.
>>> We work to improve ourselves and to earn money for a better life.
2. At first time we will have a quiet life but we will lazy as time goes by and at the end we will miss work.
>>> At first we\'ll have a quiet life but as time goes by, we will eventually miss working.
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