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2018-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Shelly

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1.he 2. she 3. he 4. her 5. he when i study for nurse lisence test,( 2 years ago) i got a lot of stress and i ate a lot of fast food , spicy food every day one day i got a stomachache i went to the hospital doctor said " you dont eat more bad food" I listened very well for just a few days. but ..... i started eating bad food before the test day ( when a few day before the test) i saw the my blood dung, blood was not stoped . after the test , doctor said you must to operation i had small bowel resection surgery ( around 40 cm resection) shelly dont worry . small bowel is 8m haha.. i always ware(be careful) at bad food. but that is very difficult dilicious food is almost stimulating food ㅠㅠ i was discharged at the hospital . i draw line at eating food a few day ..

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름]! How are you feeling today. I hope you are getting better.
See you in class later.

-Teacher Shelly-


HOMEWORK:
We don’t to like using the same noun twice in a sentence twice. Instead, we replace it with a pronoun.
For instance: Jake was tired so Jake stopped to take a rest. Versus Jake was tired so he stopped to take a rest.
Complete the sentences below with an appropriate pronoun:

1. Joe was hungry so ___________ made himself a sandwich.
2. Niki was bored so _____________ went to bed.
3. Jay ran so quickly that _____________ won the race.
4. Lily was tying her shoelace on her shoe but ___________ shoelace broke.
5. Pete sang so loudly that ________________ hurt his throat.


1.he
>>> Correct!
 2. she
>>> Correct!
 3. he
>>> Correct!
 4. her
>>> Correct
 5. he
>>> Correct!
Answers:
1. Joe was hungry so he made himself a sandwich.
2. Niki was bored so she went to bed.
3. Jay ran so quickly that he won the race.
4. Lily was tying her shoelace on her shoe but she shoelace broke.
5. Pete sang so loudly that he hurt his throat. 


 when i study for nurse lisence test,( 2 years ago) i got a lot of stress
>>> When I was having my review for the nursing licensure exams, I\'m was stressed.

 and i ate a lot of fast food , spicy food every day
>>>I ate at fast foods and a lot of spicy foods every day.

 one day i got a stomachache i went to the hospital
 doctor said \" you dont eat more bad food\"
>>>One day I got a stomachache.
>>> I went to the hospital and the doctor said: \"Don\'t eat a lot foods that are not good for you.\"
 
I listened very well for just a few days.
>>>Correct!

i started eating bad food
>>>I started eating foods that is not good for me.

 before the test day ( when a few day before the test)
 i saw the my blood dung,

 blood was not stoped .
>>>A few days before my test I saw blood in my stool.
after the test , doctor said you must to operation
>>> After the test, my doctor said I must have an operation.
 i had small bowel resection surgery
>>> I had a small bowel resection surgery ( around 40 cm resection)
 shelly dont worry .small bowel is 8m haha..
>>> Shelly, don\'t worry because the surgery is only 8 mm.

 i always ware(be careful) at bad food.
>>> I am always aware regarding bad foods.

but that is very difficult
 dilicious food is almost stimulating food ㅠㅠ
>>> It is very difficult to resist it.
>>>Almost all delicious food are stimulating.

i was discharged at the hospital .
>>> I was discharged from the hospital.

 i draw line at eating food a few day ..
>> > I drew a line in eating food a few days ago.

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