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Subject : What is your opinion about recycling and what are the advantages and disadvantages of using paper instead of plastic bags?
Recycling is must have to do everyone I think.
Because the earth already have the problem about environmental destruction. So, we can do the basic things.
First, Do using paper bags.
Second, Reusing clothes, boxes, and giving things for other you're not using.
Third, limit on use plastic.
Especially, I want to talk about paper bags.
"Is this better than plastic bags?" I really wonder about this.
Paper bags have the advantage that easy to composition. While a plastic, hard to composition and emit a lot of environmental hormones.
but paper bags also have disadvantages. That is a heavy, easy to wet. Also, it is used by trees anyway.
In conclution,I recommend a cotton bag instead of plastic or paper bags.
It's light and have a nice illustration.
Thanks
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Kelly, thank you dear for this essay. I hope will become aware of the importance of saving our environment. If what you say about using cotton is correct then I will also support its use.
~T. Irene~
advantages and disadvantages of using paper instead of plastic bags?
Recycling is must have to do everyone I think.
>>> I think, recycling is important for everybody to follow.
Because the earth already have the problem about environmental destruction.
>>> This is because the earth is already suffering from a lot of environmental problems.
So, we can do the basic things.
>>> This is one of the basic things we can do.
First, Do using paper bags.
>>> First, the use of paper bags.
Second, Reusing clothes, boxes, and giving things for other you\'re not using.
>>> Second, reuse of old clothes and/or donating things we don\'t already use.
Third, limit on use plastic.
>>> Third, limit the use of plastics.
Especially, I want to talk about paper bags.
>>> I want to especially point out the use of paper bags.
\"Is this better than plastic bags?\" I really wonder about this.
>>> For the question, \"Is this better than plastic bags?\" I really wonder about this.
Paper bags have the advantage that easy to composition.
>>> Paper bags easily decompose.
While a plastic, hard to composition and emit a lot of environmental hormones.
>>> On the other hand, plastics are hard to decompose and when melted, they emit dangerous gases.
but paper bags also have disadvantages.
>>> However, there are also some disadvantages to using paper bags.
That is a heavy, easy to wet.
>>> They feel so heavy and they easily get wet.
Also, it is used by trees anyway.
>>> More importantly, they are made by cutting trees.
In conclusion, I recommend a cotton bag instead of plastic or paper bags.
>>> In conclusion, I recommend the use of cotton bags instead of plastic or paper bags.
It\'s light and have a nice illustration.
>>> It\'s lighter and looks good.
Thanks
>>> Thank you.
~T. Irene~
advantages and disadvantages of using paper instead of plastic bags?
Recycling is must have to do everyone I think.
>>> I think, recycling is important for everybody to follow.
Because the earth already have the problem about environmental destruction.
>>> This is because the earth is already suffering from a lot of environmental problems.
So, we can do the basic things.
>>> This is one of the basic things we can do.
First, Do using paper bags.
>>> First, the use of paper bags.
Second, Reusing clothes, boxes, and giving things for other you\'re not using.
>>> Second, reuse of old clothes and/or donating things we don\'t already use.
Third, limit on use plastic.
>>> Third, limit the use of plastics.
Especially, I want to talk about paper bags.
>>> I want to especially point out the use of paper bags.
\"Is this better than plastic bags?\" I really wonder about this.
>>> For the question, \"Is this better than plastic bags?\" I really wonder about this.
Paper bags have the advantage that easy to composition.
>>> Paper bags easily decompose.
While a plastic, hard to composition and emit a lot of environmental hormones.
>>> On the other hand, plastics are hard to decompose and when melted, they emit dangerous gases.
but paper bags also have disadvantages.
>>> However, there are also some disadvantages to using paper bags.
That is a heavy, easy to wet.
>>> They feel so heavy and they easily get wet.
Also, it is used by trees anyway.
>>> More importantly, they are made by cutting trees.
In conclusion, I recommend a cotton bag instead of plastic or paper bags.
>>> In conclusion, I recommend the use of cotton bags instead of plastic or paper bags.
It\'s light and have a nice illustration.
>>> It\'s lighter and looks good.
Thanks
>>> Thank you.
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