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Hello Yoon! Thank you for sending this. I appreciate the effort. These are the privileges you could do when living in a city. There are a lot of things to do and places to go to. Good for you! Relieving stress is definitely important.

- T. Beth 

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Usually, I go to karaoke with my friends.

>>>> CORRECT.

>>>> OR: I usually go to karaoke with my friends.      

In fact, I\'m poor at singing because I can\'t reach high note but I just enjoy it.

>>>>  CORRECT.

>>>> OR: In fact, I\'m poor at singing because I can\'t reach high notes. I just enjoy it.     

I\'m into ballad music these days, so I sing that songs.

>>>> I\'m into ballad music these days, so I sing those songs.

I love some k-pops especially Twice\'s.

>>>>  OR: I love k-pop songs especially those of Twice.     

I dance to the Twice\'s music, but my friends don\'t like that.

>>>>  I dance to Twice\'s songs but my friends don\'t like that.     

Also, I go to decent restaurant with my boyfriend because delicious food bring me a happiness.

>>>>  In addition, I go to decent restaurants with my boyfriend because delicious food brings me happiness.

After eating as much as we hold, we go to an pleasant cafe and order sweet beverages with desserts.

>>>>  After eating as much as we can hold, we go to a pleasant cafe and order sweet beverages with desserts.