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Jean
>> How do you feel about time that is wasted?
well.. i have to grudge the time that is wasted. recently i have spent lazy days on the excuse of having a hard part-time job.
>> I have to say that I feel very regretful about the time I wasted. Recently, I have spent lazy days on the excuse that my part-time job was hard.
i did many things at the same time during last semester .
>> I did many things at the same time during the last semester.
i prepared for graduation exhibition,reports and job interview losing my weights.
>> I prepared for my graduation exhibition, reports, and job interview as well as tried to lose weight.
although it was so hard, i was able to not waste time and felt a sense of accomplishment. looking back to myself, i think it\'s time to get rid of my laziness
>> Although it was difficult, I was able to not waste my time and felt a sense of accomplishment. Looking back, I think it\'s time to get rid of my laziness.
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