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~T. Irene~

I wish to share with you about my school.

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I think the school is the perfect place to study I had ever been.

>>>   I think the school is the most perfect place I had ever been.    
 I studied in the university which is located in the southern part of Seoul.

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I learned for 4 years in the school.

>>> I studied there for four (4) years.       
 Even though I don\'t know exackly how many people studied in there, I expected that over 1,000 people studied in the place.

>>> Even though, I don\'t know the exact number of students in that school but I expect it\'s around or over 1,000.  
 There are a variety of advantages in the university.

>>> There are a variety of advantages to studying in that university.     

The school is clean and convenient much more than other schools to study.

>>> The school surroundings are very clean and there are a lot of convenient things around.       
 There were 8 buildings and a huge library for students in the campus, and many people tried to increase and develop their abilities and experiences.

>>>    There are 8 buildings and 1 huge library in the campus. Many of the students study in there to increase and develop their abilities and experiences.
 Besides that, there were a lot of trees and flowers in the campus, so I could studied with fresh environment

>>> Besides that, there were a lot of trees and flowers in the campus so one could study in a quiet and refreshing environment       
 However, one of the drawback is the cafeteria inside the university.

>>>   However, one of the drawbacks is the cafeteria inside the university.     

It was in a poor condition and the food was not delicious.

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 So, every dinner time, I had to go out and found a better restaurant.

>>>  So every dinner time, I had to go out and   find a good restaurant.