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Greatly done Kelly! ^_^

~. T. Irene ~

I wish to share with you about an item I bought but do not often use.

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 It is a long white dress I bought last month.

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I usually enjoy shopping and go shopping almost once a week.

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 last month I went one of the big shopping centers in Korea, which is located in the southern part of seoul.

>>>  Last month, I went to one of the big shopping centers in Korea, which is located in the southern part of Seoul.
 Even though I looked for some pants, I found the dress.

>>> I was looking for some pants but I found the dress instead.

It looked beautiful and trendy.

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 The dress had a small belt with glitters, and also fitted for me.

>>> The dress had a small belt with glitters, and it also fitted me well. 

Furthermore, the cloth was made by a famous designer.

>>> Furthermore, the clothes was made by a famous designer.
 Aside from that, it was on sale although the dress was up-to-date product.

>>>  Aside from that, it was on sale although the dress was a the newest fashion.

After so many concerned myself, I bought it.

>>> After a lot of considerations ,I bought it.
 I am so happy and satisfied with my consume

>>>  I was so happy and satisfied with my purchase.
 However, one of the drawback is that the cloth was not normal, so I could not wear everyday.

>>>  However, one of the drawbacks is that the dress was not common or appropriate for all occasions, so I could not wear it everyday.
 Nevertheless, I didn\'t regret spending money on it since it was the perfect dress I had ever met.

>>> Nevertheless, I don\'t regret spending money on it since it was the best dress I\'ve ever seen so far.
 I think that\'s all I want to say. Thanks

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