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학생이 쓴 원문
1. Would you like butter on your role / roll? roll
2. I have taken the nominal role / roll. Everyone is present. role
3. It's my roll / role to keep the executives informed of any changes to the project. role
4. The tent roles / rolls up and fits neatly in the backpack. roll
I was very busy on this weeks because one of professor working in our section went to an our branch hospital. To me, the hospital working isn't worth to pay less attention to my family, however, I worked very hard to fill the blank of her. Fortunately there was no accident in our section on this week. Anyway, she will comback next week.
My wife and I played screen golf (a kind of indoor golf game) yesterday night. I almostly played under-par until 17 hole. Because I missed my driver shot on 18 hole I scored triple bogey. Although I finished in 3 over-par in that game, it was my best score in screen golf game.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Dr. [이름],
Thank you for this composition. I wish to talk to you about it in the class. Take care! Happy weekend.
-Verna-
1. Would you like butter on your role / roll? roll
>>Correct2. I have taken the nominal role / roll. Everyone is present. role
>>Correct3. It\'s my roll / role to keep the executives informed of any changes to the project. role
>>Correct4. The tent roles / rolls up and fits neatly in the backpack. rolls>>CorrectI was very busy on this weeks because one of professor working in our section went to an our branch hospital.
>>I was very busy these past weeksbecause one of my professor is working in our section went to the hospital\'s branch.
To me, the hospital working isn\'t worth to pay less attention to my family, however, I worked very hard to fill the blank of her.
>>To me work in the hospital isn\'t worth to pay less attention to my family however, I worked very hard to her job.
Fortunately there was no accident in our section on this week.
>>Correct
Anyway, she will comeback next week. >>CorrectMy wife and I played screen golf (a kind of indoor golf game) yesterday night.
>>Correct
I almostly played under-par until 17 hole.
>>Correct
Because I missed my driver shot on 18 hole I scored triple bogey.
>>Correct
Although I finished in 3 over-par in that game, it was my best score in screen golf game.
>>Correct
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