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학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Writing Task: Can you tell me something about your hometown?
I live in Daejeon, the thrid of largest town in South Korea.
I was born in here, so i know that where is the popular spot in Daejeon! So, i’ll tell about that.
The Hanbat Botanical Garden is famous forum in Daejeon. And also can hire a bicycle at HBG.
When springs to come, Lots of flowers and trees are blossom in there, enjoy the beautiful scenery while riding a bike, not only local people but also tourist.
강사 첨삭
Hi again Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for sharing about your hometown.
I guess many tourists local and international would love to visit your city, myself included.
Let\'s practice again tomorrow. :)
I live in Daejeon, the thrid of largest town in South Korea.
>>I live in Daejeon, the third largest city in South Korea.
I was born in here, so i know that where is the popular spot in Daejeon!
>>I was born here, and I know a famous place in Daejeon!
So, i’ll tell about that.
>>So, let me tell you about it.
The Hanbat Botanical Garden is famous forum in Daejeon.
>>Hanbat Botanical Garden is a famous place in Daejeon.
And also can hire a bicycle at HBG.
>>And you can rent a bike at HBG.
When springs to come, Lots of flowers and trees are blossom in there, enjoy the beautiful scenery while riding a bike, not only local people but also tourist.
>>When spring comes, there are many flowers and trees blooming, cycling and enjoying the beautiful scenery, which can be enjoyed not only by locals but also by tourists.
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