H.W and e-mail written in my company

2017-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Travis

학생이 쓴 원문

Fill in the correct words from the choices: Choices: hang up/ let down/ throw out/ end up with I just throw out my first issue of Motorcycle Mama. I'm nobody's mama and I don't own a motorcycle, so how did I end up with this subscription? Well, my neighbor's son was raising money for his soccer team, and I didn't want to let him down. It's easy to hang up on telemarketers, but it's hard to say no to your friends and neighbors. Below is the email I wrote in my company. Dear [Name]. [Name] I received the call from DHL Corporation which is the deliverer of the sample you asked for. And I heard that the procedure of customs clearance is being delayed because the necessary documents was not submitted. Maybe you had received the e-mail from DHL. Pleace check and send the documents as soon as possible. If you do hurry, the sample will be delivered quickly. Thanks and Best regards.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!


Nice work with the letter you made. You almost perfect the letter, there are just some things that I want you to focus on. I will discuss this to you later. :)


Teacher Travis.


Dear [Name]. [Name]

>>Correct.
 I received the call from DHL Corporation which is the deliverer of the sample you asked for.

>>I received a call from DHL corporation which is recipient of the sample you asked for. 
 And I heard that the procedure of customs clearance is being delayed because the necessary documents was not submitted.

>>Correct.
 Maybe you had received the e-mail from DHL. Pleace check and send the documents as soon as possible.

>>Correct.
 If you do hurry, the sample will be delivered quickly.

>>Correct

>>OR: Please do this as soon as possible for a quick delivery.
 Thanks and Best regards.

>>Correct.

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