H.W and e-mail written in my company
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Nice work with the letter you made. You almost perfect the letter, there are just some things that I want you to focus on. I will discuss this to you later. :)
Teacher Travis.
Dear [Name]. [Name]
>>Correct.
I received the call from DHL Corporation which is the deliverer of the sample you asked for.
>>I received a call from DHL corporation which is recipient of the sample you asked for.
And I heard that the procedure of customs clearance is being delayed because the necessary documents was not submitted.
>>Correct.
Maybe you had received the e-mail from DHL. Pleace check and send the documents as soon as possible.
>>Correct.
If you do hurry, the sample will be delivered quickly.
>>Correct
>>OR: Please do this as soon as possible for a quick delivery.
Thanks and Best regards.
>>Correct.
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