h.w / My role model

1. He was the first pitcher to throw a fast ball at me. 2. My beautiful old claw-foot bathtub sprung a leak. 3. She has been a good friend and has kept my secret for years. 4. The storm hasn't hitten the coast yet. 5. It seemed that nobody knew about our change in plans. My role model is a talk show host. She is best at her, despite she is black. She overcomes her ordeals at teenage. She became a actress, and every her movie was successed. She founded a entertain company and it was successed. She is Oprah Winfery!!

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I like Oprah Winfrey, too! She has lots of words of wisdom to share, and I really admire her. Take care and talk to you later! T. JanE ^^ 1. He was the first pitcher to throw a fast ball at me.>> Correct 2. My beautiful old claw-foot bathtub sprung a leak.>> My beautiful old claw-foot bathtub _c. sprang_ a leak. 3. She has been a good friend and has kept my secret for years.>> Correct 4. The storm hasn\'t hitten the coast yet.>> The storm hasn\'t _a. hit_ the coast yet. 5. It seemed that nobody knew about our change in plans.>> Correct My role model is a talk show host.>> Correct She is best at her, despite she is black.>> She is the best depite being a black.  She overcomes her ordeals at teenage.>> She overcome her ordeals in her teenage years.  She became a actress, and every her movie was successed.>> She became an actress and all her movies succeeded.  She founded a entertain company and it was successed.>> She founded an entertainment company and it also succeeded.  She is Oprah Winfery!! >> Correct