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2012-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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1.I usually go shopping at Coex mall and Jamsil station in seoul Korea. Because I was brought up around Coex mall so I feel friendly them. 2.I often go shopping so I can't count numbers. 3.I like window shoppings and to buy funny sometings for me . 4.I usually buy clothes, earings,cosmetics,gifts and delicious foods. 5.First I think about items and prices because I am a reasonable consumer.

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T[이름]k you so much for answering your homework, Winnie. I really appreciate your effort in doing this. Here then are the answers. See you in class! Teacher Lara 1.I usually go shopping at Coex mall and Jamsil station in Seoul Korea. >> CorrectBecause I was brought up around Coex mall so I feel friendly them.>> Because I was brought up near the Coex Mall so I feel comfortable in that place.2.I often go shopping so I can\'t count numbers. >> I go shopping too often so I could track how many times I\'ve been shopping.3.I like window shoppings and to buy funny sometings for me . >> I like window shopping and buy funny things for myself.4.I usually buy clothes, earings,cosmetics,gifts and delicious foods. >> Correct5.First I think about items and prices because I am a reasonable consumer. >> First, I think about the items and their prices because I am a wise consumer.

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