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2018-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I don't think the purpose of the fashion show is to sell those clothes to their customers becuase those seem a little bit strange. I think the later statement that the purpose of the fashion show is to notifying the designer's name to customers or enterprises is more possible guess. I don't know well about fashion, so it seems so strange for me to do like those festival, but I think there must be the exact purpose for this festival.

강사 첨삭

Hey Jay!(\",)

I don\'t understand also when I see fashion models wear very strange clothing on those fashion shows. It makes me wonder who would wear them.(\",)

~T. Lynn

I don\'t think the purpose of the fashion show is to sell those clothes to their customers because those seem a little bit strange.

>> correct!

I think the later statement that the purpose of the fashion show is to notifying the designer\'s name to customers or enterprises is more possible guess.

>> I think the purpose of the fashion show is to advertise or promote the designer\'s name to customers or enterprises is more possible reason.

I don\'t know well about fashion, so it seems so strange for me to do like those festival, but I think there must be the exact purpose for this festival.

>> I don\'t know well about fashion so those festival seems so strange to me but I think there must be a real reason/purpose for this festival.

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