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How aer you today? Today i feel very good and bad.
Because the weather today same yesterday however today is all fay raining and damp. But today is friday!!! Tomorrow is saturday!!!oh my god!!i am so happy.
But... i am tired. Nowadays my body most feels tired. I am sad. Then i early go to bsd. Then tomorrow i early wake up! But i have study.. my school have big test 10.1and2. Oh my god. So sad. So my mom saied "you have big test in october. You have to study! Fight." Then i should study. Oh. I have a call see you soon.♥♥♥
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Happy Friday [이름]!
Thank you for always sending your compositions everyday!
Keep it up!! Your sentences are improving!!
Always review the corrections I give you so that you will not repeat the same mistakes next time.
Have a happy weekend!!
~ T. Giselle :)
How aer you today?
>> Correct! (Spelling check: are)
Today i feel very good and bad.>> Today I feel very good but I feel bad also.
Because the weather today same yesterday however today is all fay raining and damp.
>> Because the weather today is the same as yesterday\'s. However, it rained all day and it is damp everywhere.
But today is friday!!!
>> Correct! (Capitalize the first letter of Friday)
Tomorrow is saturday!!!
>> Correct! (Saturday)
oh my god!!i am so happy.>> Correct!
But... i am tired.
>> Correct!
Nowadays my body most feels tired.
>> Nowadays, I easily feel tired.
I am sad.
>> Correct.
Then i early go to bsd.
>> I will go to bed early tonight.
Then tomorrow i early wake up!
>> Then I will wake up early tomorrow!
But i have study.. my school have big test 10.1and2.
>> But I have to study because I have big tests on 10.1 and 10.2.
Oh my god.
>> Correct!
So sad.
>> Correct!
So my mom saied \"you have big test in october.
>> So my mom said, \"You have a big test in October.
You have to study!
>> Correct!
Fight.\"
>> Fighting!\"
Then i should study.
>> That is why I should study.
Oh. I have a call see you soon.♥♥♥
>> Oh, I will talk to you soon. ♥♥♥
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