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2013-08-27 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello teacher.. we had last class in this evening. I am so sad. But we will see later at sometime. Thank you for everyrhing you have done for me. If my mom pay in power english so we will see soon. Ha ha. Then i am so happy. Anyway today is so sad and great. Because we had last class that i feel sad and my favorite drama watch tomorrow that i feel great. Good day. Teacher. I will want to see you later. And i will study hard. Fighting. Yeah!! I success diet so i will pretty.... I will end this letter. Anyway thank you teacher♥♥good night^^

강사 첨삭

Hello there dearest [이름], I really appreciate this letter of yours tonight. It is just sad that we had our last class this evening. I really look forward to meeting you again soon. Always study hard and believe in yourself!!! Fighting!! See you again next time!! It was really nice meeting you. Take care!! ~ T. Giselle ^_^   Hello teacher.. >> Correct! we had last class in this evening. >> We just had our last class this evening. I am so sad. >> Correct! But we will see later at sometime. >> But we will see each other later. Thank you for everyrhing you have done for me. >> Correct! If my mom pay in power english so we will see soon. Ha ha. >> If my mom will pay for my Power English class, we will see each other soon. Ha ha. Then i am so happy. >> I will be so happy by then. Anyway today is so sad and great. >> Correct! Because we had last class that i feel sad and my favorite drama watch tomorrow that i feel great. >> Because we had our last class that is why I feel sad. Nevertherless, I can watch my favorite drama tomorrow so I feel great.  Good day. >> Correct!Teacher. I will want to see you later. >> Teacher, I want to see you later. And i will study hard. >> Correct~! Fighting. Yeah!! >> Correct~! I success diet so i will pretty.... >> I will be successful in my diet plans so I will be prettier soon. I will end this letter. >> I will end this letter here. Anyway thank you teacher♥♥good night^^ >> Correct!  

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