habit
학생이 쓴 원문
Most of children don\'t like eating vegetables and mixed grain.
It is natural response because such foods are not delicious and sweet.
Especially nowadays instant and processed foods developed too much.
The taste of children are tempted and accustomed by those food.
Even though we should encourage healthy eating habits by regular meal at home.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
I agree with you, I think not only children but many adults as well don\'t like eating vegetables. I had a conversation with many university students and they admitted that they don\'t eat a lot of vegetables except when their parents are around.
Have a good afternoon!
Aki~
Most of children don\'t like eating vegetables and mixed grain.
>> Most children don\'t like eating vegetables and mixed grains.
It is natural response because such foods are not delicious and sweet.
>> It is a natural response because such foods are not delicious and sweet.
Especially nowadays instant and processed foods developed too much.
>> Especially nowadays, instant and processed foods have developed too much.
The taste of children are tempted and accustomed by those food.
>>> The taste of children is tempted and accustomed to that food.
Even though we should encourage healthy eating habits by regular meal at home.
>>> Even though we should encourage healthy eating habits by having regular meals at home.
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