had a dinner with our department.
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning. lei.~ i'm so sorry for yesterday. my boss held a meeting at around lunch time. so i couldn't be attend our class. and i am thankful for your understanding and your letter. ^ ^
with your concerned, i could finish my work during the work time.
after work, i went to dinner with my department member. it was reward for our task from my boss. we had sliced raw fish for our dinner. i used to dislike raw fish. but nowadays, i crave it. and also a pepper pt too. i enjoyed with our team member and i ate until my stomach was full. after dinner, i had to drive on way home.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You passed here a very good composition. Keep it up and keep on practicing. Always stay happy and enjoy life. Enjoy studying English too. See you later.
Lei J
Good morning. lei.~
>>correct!
i'm so sorry for yesterday.
>>correct!
>>I am so sorry about yesterday. (better)^^
my boss held a meeting at around lunch time.
>>correct!
so i couldn't be attend our class.
>>so, I couldn’t attend to our class.
and i am thankful for your understanding and your letter. ^ ^>>correct!
with your concerned,
>>and to your concern too.
i could finish my work during the work time. >>I finished my work during the day.
after work, i went to dinner with my department member.
>>correct!
it was reward for our task from my boss.
>>it was a reward from our boss.
we had sliced raw fish for our dinner.
>>we had raw fish for dinner.
i used to dislike raw fish.
>>correct!
but nowadays, i crave it.
>>but nowadays, I carve for it.
and also a pepper pt too.
>>and also pepper pt.
i enjoyed with our team member and i ate until my stomach was full.
>>I enjoyed eating with our team members and I ate until my stomach was full.
after dinner, i had to drive on way home.
>>after dinner, I have to drive on my way home.
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