had a dinner with our department.

2010-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning. lei.~ i'm so sorry for yesterday. my boss held a meeting at around lunch time. so i couldn't be attend our class. and i am thankful for your understanding and your letter. ^ ^ with your concerned, i could finish my work during the work time. after work, i went to dinner with my department member. it was reward for our task from my boss. we had sliced raw fish for our dinner. i used to dislike raw fish. but nowadays, i crave it. and also a pepper pt too. i enjoyed with our team member and i ate until my stomach was full. after dinner, i had to drive on way home.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! You passed here a very good composition. Keep it up and keep on practicing. Always stay happy and enjoy life. Enjoy studying English too. See you later. Lei J   Good morning. lei.~ >>correct! i'm so sorry for yesterday. >>correct! >>I am so sorry about yesterday. (better)^^ my boss held a meeting at around lunch time. >>correct! so i couldn't be attend our class. >>so, I couldn’t attend to our class. and i am thankful for your understanding and your letter. ^ ^>>correct! with your concerned, >>and to your concern too. i could finish my work during the work time. >>I finished my work during the day. after work, i went to dinner with my department member. >>correct! it was reward for our task from my boss. >>it was a reward from our boss. we had sliced raw fish for our dinner. >>we had raw fish for dinner. i used to dislike raw fish. >>correct! but nowadays, i crave it. >>but nowadays, I carve for it. and also a pepper pt too. >>and also pepper pt. i enjoyed with our team member and i ate until my stomach was full. >>I enjoyed eating with our team members and I ate until my stomach was full. after dinner, i had to drive on way home. >>after dinner, I have to drive on my way home.

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