had a dinner with our department.
학생이 쓴 원문
because the restaurant is located far from my home so i had to back home with my team member. but he was drunken. so he asked me to drive his car. i worried about driving his car. because i didn't dirve a sedan and also it was raining. it's too dangerous driving during raining. in addition, another person's car is dangerous too. because if car accident happen, it couldn't insure the accident. during the way home i was very nervous. it took a 1 hour from the restaurant to my home. anyway, i arrived home safety and i have a courage to drive.
강사 첨삭
because the restaurant is located far from my home so i had to back home with my team member.
>>because the restaurant was located away from my house, I have to hitch with one of my team members.
but he was drunken.
>>but he was drunk.
so he asked me to drive his car.
>>correct!
i worried about driving his car.
>>I am really worried while driving his car.
because i didn't dirve a sedan and also it was raining.
>>Because i didn't drive a sedan before and also it was raining.
it's too dangerous driving during raining.
>>It’s dangerous to drive when it’s raining.
in addition, another person's car is dangerous too.
>>in addition, driving another person’s car is dangerous too.
because if car accident happen, it couldn't insure the accident.
>>because, in case of accident, insurance will not cover it.
during the way home i was very nervous.
>>on my way home, I was very nervous
it took a 1 hour from the restaurant to my home.
>>correct!
anyway, i arrived home safety and i have a courage to drive.
>>anyways, I arrived home safely and I now have the courage to drive.
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