Had a fun class again
학생이 쓴 원문
hi Ms. [Name] I wish meet you, don't forget to find me in facebook I know you're not allow to find me during teaching me. You know after teaching me Can you please find me? bye Have a nice day o.o
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름]
I also had fun talking to you today. I appreciate that you always laugh at my super nonsense jokes. Okay, let's have a deal... Study with me for a long time and then we can be friends on facebook.hehehe I'm curious also of what you look like. Maybe you can describe yourself to me during one of our free talking classes.hehehe. How about that?
Anyway, I'll talk to you tomorrow [이름]. :)
xoxo,
-- Ella --
Here are my corrections for you^^:
hi Ms. [Name]
>>
I wish meet you,
>>I wish to meet you.
don't forget to find me in facebook
>>CORRECT
I know you're not allow to find me during teaching me.
>>I know you're not allowed to find me while you are still teaching me.
You know after teaching me Can you please find me?
>>When our class ends, can you please find me?
bye Have a nice day o.o
>>
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