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2014-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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IT is not conveinent that is so far out of town. I have to translate 2times to go to city, my acadamy as well. So I exhuste every day after Icome home from acadamy. Rose. I am displaying my talant which olny one talant has gived to God for breakfast. See you soon.

강사 첨삭

Let us just be thankful we have certain talents^^ However, I envy you for being a cooking prowess! Thanks, [이름]! Have a wonderful Thursday! IT is not conveinent that is so far out of town. >>It is inconvenient if it is far from the town.I have to translate 2times to go to city, my acadamy as well. >>I have to commute twice in order to go downtown or to my academy.So I exhuste every day after Icome home from acadamy.>>Therefore, I am very tired upon arriving there.Rose. >>CORRECT!I am displaying my talant which olny one talant has gived to God for breakfast.>>Breakfast is only the time I can display the talent God has given me. See you soon. >>CORRECT!

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