haha
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IT is not conveinent that is so far out of town.
I have to translate 2times to go to city, my acadamy as well.
So I exhuste every day after Icome home from acadamy.
Rose.
I am displaying my talant which olny one talant has gived to God for breakfast.
See you soon.
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Let us just be thankful we have certain talents^^
However, I envy you for being a cooking prowess!
Thanks, [이름]! Have a wonderful Thursday!
IT is not conveinent that is so far out of town.
>>It is inconvenient if it is far from the town.I have to translate 2times to go to city, my acadamy as well.
>>I have to commute twice in order to go downtown or to my academy.So I exhuste every day after Icome home from acadamy.>>Therefore, I am very tired upon arriving there.Rose.
>>CORRECT!I am displaying my talant which olny one talant has gived to God for breakfast.>>Breakfast is only the time I can display the talent God has given me.
See you soon.
>>CORRECT!
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