HAHAHA- My homework\'s late! ;)

2024-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

학생이 쓴 원문

Last week, I slept all day lying down at home. My friends played together and I really didn\'t want to go. So I just slept and cleaned the 2nd floor I slept in the room to clean up and sleep, but when I slept with a blanket, my big pillows were fine, but when I slept on a mattress, my neck hurt so much that I woke up twice. My throat still hurts ;)

강사 첨삭

Hi Da [이름], 

Haha, it sounds like you had quite an adventure at home! Cleaning and catching up on sleep can be refreshing. Just be careful with that neck - maybe try adjusting the mattress or pillows for a cozier sleep next time. Hope your throat feels better soon! 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

Last week, I slept all day lying down at home. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Last week, I spent the entire day resting at home. 

My friends played together and I really didn\'t want to go. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>My friends were playing together, but I didn\'t feel like joining them. 

So I just slept and cleaned the 2nd floor 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I slept and cleaned the second floor. 

I slept in the room to clean up and sleep, but when I slept with a blanket, my big pillows were fine, but when I slept on a mattress, my neck hurt so much that I woke up twice. 

>>When I slept in the room I cleaned, using a blanket and big pillows was fine, but when I slept on the mattress, my neck hurt so much that I woke up twice. 

My throat still hurts ;) 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I still have a sore throat. 

 

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