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2012-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Lorraine

학생이 쓴 원문

hi! teacher! how are you?! today! I'm very happy! because, I think that accomodate to our class Still, I can't listen english very well~^^ but, with you by my side, I can speak English very well~! ( in the class, learned expressions ) korea is really cold today! with lots of snow~ It's freezing in my room~! what's the weather like out there?

강사 첨삭

Hi SH!!   I\'m feeling excellent! - That\'s a new expression too! Use it next time too! Haha! Wow, I\'m very happy that you are very happy today! Haha! It made me laugh when you used our Key expression before in Chapter 1 of our book. Good job! You are very confident now! I heard that it\'s very cold right now in Korea, so do take care! Here in my city (Baguio), it is very cold too, I also feel cold right now.  Well, how about your exam results, SH??  I\'m dying to hear the good news! :) It\'s lunch time now, I hope you have eaten your lunch already.   See you on monday!   -Lovelots, Joey   hi! teacher! how are you?! today! >>> Hi teacher! How are you today?I\'m very happy! because, I think that accomodate to our class. >>> ( I\'m not sure if this is what you mean) I\'m very happy beacuse of our class today.Still, I can\'t listen english very well~^^ >>> Still, I \'m having a hard time listening wellbut, with you by my side, I can speak English very well~! >>> Correct!( in the class, learned expressions ) >>> I learned this expression in our class!korea is really cold today! with lots of snow~ >>> It\'s really cold in Korea today and it\'s snowing!It\'s freezing in my room~! >>> Correct!what\'s the weather like out there? >>> What\'s the weather out there?    

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