HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH KKKKKKKKKK
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi. T.Cam.
Did I have a class with you today??????kkk
I don't remember! So, would you plz call again?? hahahaha. ; D
WoW, I finally get a sponsor which called Child-Foundation.
This foundation is NPO. So I can't expect to support lots of money.
But I don't care it. I really just appreciate some help and knowing my real heat.
Surely I'll succeed my fund-raising event in our country though my bike travel.
And I hope many poor children have a bicycle and books by my fund-raising.
Fighting!!!!!!!!!!~~~~~kkkkkkkkkkk umhahahha~
강사 첨삭
Wow! That was actually a very heroic act that you have for poor children my dear [이름]!!
Im so happy that you have a good purpose in life..
Anyway, keep up the good deed that you have..and YES WE DID HAVE A CLASS TODAY!!!!!!kkkkk..
take care always baby and have a good day!!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hi. T.Cam.Did I have a class with you today??????kkk>>correct
>>Did I have class with you today?I don\'t remember! So, would you plz call again?? hahahaha. ; D>>correct..Correct sentence but baby no text please,kkk..it should be PLEASE..:DWoW, I finally get a sponsor which called Child-Foundation.>>correctThis foundation is NPO.
>>correct
So I can\'t expect to support lots of money.>>So I\'m not expecting them to support me with lots of money.But I don\'t care it.
>>But I dont care about it.
I really just appreciate some help and knowing my real heat.>>correctSurely I\'ll succeed my fund-raising event in our country though my bike travel.>>Surely I will succeed with my fund raising through my bicycle trip.And I hope many poor children have a bicycle and books by my fund-raising.>>And Im hoping that many poor children will have a bike and some books with the help of my fund raising.Fighting!!!!!!!!!!~~~~~kkkkkkkkkkk umhahahha~
>>correct
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