Halo~ :-)
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Hi! Thank you for the compliment regarding my voice. Goddluck on your review. :)
Beautiful day, dear.
>>It is a beautiful day, dear.
I had a good time while talking on the phone with you.
>> I had a good time talking on the phone with you.
I will not take our class tomorrow.
>> CORRECT.
As you told me ealrier, I will take to review.
>> As you told me earlier, I should review.
And I would like to talk about my favorite restaurant and my typical weekend on the next meeting. Is it okay?
>> Is it okay if I talk about my favorite restaurant, and my typical weekend during the next meeting?
But I'm going to write about my favorite restaurant only.
>> I'm only going to write about my favorite restaurant .
Because it is limited to 800 words.
>> CORRECT.
My favorite restaurant is 'outback' where is located in downtown.
>> My favorite restaurant is 'Outback'. It is located downtown.
There is located on the second floor and gives me a feeling like entering the vessel.
>> It is located on the second floor and it gives me a feeling like I am entering a vessel.
The place sell western food.
>> The place offers western food.
I go to there on special days like family affair and anniversary.
>> I go there on special days like family affairs and anniversaries.
Because the service is very kind and the food is good.
>> It is because their service is very prompt, people are kind, and the food is good.
The bread's taste which gives us as appetizer is very delicious.
>> They give us bread as an appetizer. It is very delicious.
Ms. [Name]
>> CORRECT.
I already miss your clear voice.
>> CORRECT.
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