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2015-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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I will change the curriculum to suit the students.At first,I will reduce morality,history,and technique.And I will roll out P.E and art,music,science. and the test is once a semester.and once a week,students have a creative activities.

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Hi [이름], I am glad that you\'re able to express yourself in writing. Just continue to practice because this could really help you with your skills in English. Take care and God bless!!! Have a great day!!! Thank you for your essay!!! T. Jeny     I will change the curriculum to suit the students. >>I will change the curriculum taht will suit the students. At first,I will reduce morality,history,and technique. >>At first,I will reduce Morality,History,and Technique. And I will roll out. >>I will remove P.E and Arts,Music and Science.and the test is once a semester.and once a week,students have a creative activities. >>And there will be one test in every semester. And students will do creative activity once a week.

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