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I will change the curriculum to suit the students.At first,I will reduce morality,history,and technique.And I will roll out P.E and art,music,science.
and the test is once a semester.and once a week,students have a creative activities.
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I will change the curriculum to suit the students.
>>I will change the curriculum taht will suit the students.
At first,I will reduce morality,history,and technique.
>>At first,I will reduce Morality,History,and Technique.
And I will roll out.
>>I will remove P.E and Arts,Music and Science.and the test is once a semester.and once a week,students have a creative activities.
>>And there will be one test in every semester. And students will do creative activity once a week.
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